OOC: Critique Post

[overlords_wrath]

Got any questions, comments, critique?

Laharl's gotten stupid messed up here, there's no denying that, lol. I worry a LOT LOT LOT. DX I've made a lot of mistakes, I'll be the first to admit that. There's a lot I wish I could go back and rewrite... even in recent threads. orz But yeah, um, I'd rather have someone contact me like this than like... fandomsecrets or rp_secrets ah hahaha ha. ^^;;;;; Anon commenting is on so yes. /o/ Comments are much appreciated!

(And a run through of what's happened thus far and some of my thoughts and comments can be found here.)

Comments

[(Anonymous)]

I think it's better to go slightly "OOC" in response to torture than simply shrugging it off. Torture screws people up, and while some folks recover more quickly than others, scars happen and there is some kind of recovery time needed.

I don't know the character well enough to say for certain, but I'd be fairly confident in calling Laharl's reactions "character development re:extraordinary circumstances" rather than "lol OOC burn the witch".

[overlords_wrath]

Whoo, another anon comment :O ♥ I didn't think I'd get replies much less so soon.

He hasn't even really had a chance to recover. .__.;;; It's been like one thing after another, lol. But, yeah, when I went into this the idea was to knock him down awhile since he'd been ready to start causing the Org all kinds of trouble. I didn't want him to just bounce right back, and it didn't seem to me to be realistic... although he's been trying to pretend to have, but it's like Larxene keeps coming and knocking the stool right out from under his feet. (...LOL that's a funny image)

But ah, thank you very much for the comment!